Monday, April 21, 2008

Afternoon

I've been waiting
all day
to hear
your little song.

4 comments:

Karen said...

This one leaves me wanting me more...whose song are you waiting to hear?

Laura said...

Karen, Thanks again for these amazing comments!
How's your writing going these days?

Karen said...

Not so well...what with the illnesses and visitors...but then, it's probably all Resistance (have you read "The War of Art"?)

I am completely awed and inspired by your example, however! I must get the butt in gear! I must write!

Saucy said...

Your little poems
are like lumps of sugar
stirred into a pot of tea
not too hot
and not too cold.

Thanks.